Bengali Poems
I will try to post them in Bengali font on the Bengali magazine site soon. I need some feedback on these ones first.
Written by: Nani Chanda
Bhalobasha
Loktaakey Kosminkaaleo jaantam naa
Ekdin kothai kothai take bollam
Aamar ekdom bhalo laagchey naa
Aamaro to taai; shey bollo
Aaami bhaablam Aapod
Onyodin swabhabik khushitei taakey bollam
Aamar aaj bhishan bhaalo laagchey
Aamaro kintu taai ; shey bollo
Aami bujhlam , aamar samuha bipod
Khoon
Ekta Cheley
Taar maa baaba bhaai bon aar
Ek chiltey ghar niyei shudhu baachar swapno dekhchilo
Shei cheley
Ekdin
Itihaasher aahbane taar
Purano swapnoguli key saarthak korar proyojoney
Deshtaakey prothom baachatey gelo
Dur chaai
Cheletai maara gelo
Rupasi naari
Nijer naarikey sambhoger icchai
Purushtir sabal aakorshan
Eki muhurtey amritpaaner akanhkai
Shishutir aakul krandan
Maajhkhaaney bichalito naari
Baa stane shishutir jonmo data
Dokkhin bookey jonmodaatar sontan
Du paashey duti obujhkey niye
Maajhkhaaney bichalito naariti shoyoney
2 comments:
bhalobasha : very amateurish
khoon : okay but very common thoughts
on the whole , nothing distinguishable . only they who are away from bengali literature or poetry will find them worth reading
a long way 2 go!!!
Thanks for your comments, One step at a time,
They are not mine, but the person behind them will take your comments with an open heart,
If you know about some one who could contribute, that would help.
Please, take that as a request from a struggling editor
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